This one seems to have fared a lot better, when it comes to effects. The shield overlays are much more what I'd search for in the future, while even the energy cannons (at full charge, naturally) look pretty decent and seem to bleed well into the defenses. I touched up the facial expression on Swiftshank's pal and refined the dialogue a bit. I even tweaked the cannon/engine on the Beryllius a touch, just for effects' sake. Now they look disabled.
Anyhow. That's all. Enjoy!